Dear K. Jui,
The attached looks great kha.
However, I would like to change some contents inside as attached.
- First sentence, please change to Beyond Marketing Solution Co.,ltd
- “Sucessful” to “SUCCESSFUL”
- “by Recruited” to “By Recruiting”
- “In the name of” to “On behalf of” (upon your consideration)
- “Presented on day” to “Presented on”
Kindly let me know for your feedback also naka.
Thank you very much kha,
Kift